You are looking for a math tutor for your son. Write a educational center to express your need and make an appointment with a tutor.
Dear Madam,
I am searching for a math mentor for my 10-year-old son. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help.
At the first time, I would like to give you brief introduction about my son. He is quite intelligent, so he can answer most questions which are suitable for his age quickly. Nevertheless, he is a bit naughty and hyperactive; hence, he rarely stays focused for long when he does homework by himself. Meanwhile, I and my partner are so busy that we do not have time to urge him to finish exercises. Therefore, I would like to be in need of a good math tutor who not only majors in primary school math but also is strict enough to help my son be more attentive to study. In addition, I would like to meet the tutor before she starts teaching my son so that we can discuss and reach some agreements regarding payments and teaching time.
Thank you so much and I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Please contact me through email or my phone.
Yours faithfully,
Mary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42245989305 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60440434968 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1592224457 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244146861052 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914694041475 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712029224724 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163587127527 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891865083623 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.