Dear Sir / Madam,
I am Sudheerkumar Motakala and an Indian national. I am currently studying “Advanced Programming Skills in Computers” in University of Cambridge. It is a two years long course and I am legally eligible to work for a part time job (My visa and conditions are enclosed on my passport).
I am writing this to get to know more details on available part time jobs in your agency. I am looking for a Computer Programmer or a Software Programmer job. Having a job in computer sector would also help me to achieve good grades in my course. My classes start at 8AM in the morning and will continue until noon. Considering my schedule, I can work in afternoon timings and weekends.
I do have an experience in IT field and in my previous jobs; I have helped other teams to complete the projects. My recent project was with University of Cambridge and I worked for the project to streamline the attendance system for students. I have skills in different programming languages like JAVA, .NET and in Data Analytics.
I am looking forward to hear from soon.
Yours faithfully
Sudheerkumar Motakalta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...and I am legally eligible to work for a part time job My visa and conditions are enclosed...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...o get to know more details on available part time jobs in your agency. I am looking for a...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...fferent programming languages like JAVA, .NET and in Data Analytics. I am looking...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...n Data Analytics. I am looking forward to hear from soon. Yours faithfully Sudheerku...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83854166667 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06327623735 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7496848452 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4615384615 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186860385991 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643789365482 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435439447452 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811448584666 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583986619815 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.