You are a member of a sport club. Write a letter to the club president about an event that will be organized.
In your letter, you should tell:
what it is
who I am inviting
what my role is in this event.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I know you usually do not hear from me; however, today I must inform you about the sports competition which will be organized in the sports complex in the first week of September.
To introduce an event; National Swimming competition for younger generation arrangements have been initiated. participants across the countries are expected to be part of the event. Categorise are distinguished as per age that is below 20 years and gender, to make this as a bias contest. Furthermore, the winners will be sponsored by Tata Company to participate in international battle happening in Huwai in November.
Guest of honour; international male champion of 2018 Swapnil Sawant is going to be present throughout the tournament along with international Women champion Shruti Jadhav. Their presence will enlighten the performance and also boost their morales to be champions of the future.
I am looking after all the managements and getting set up the area, starting from entries of participation till the facilitation of the winners. Teams are being arranged under my guidance to look after necessary roles such as changing area, monitoring the water conditions etc.
We will be glad to have you be present in the tournament and motivate the contestants for future endeavour.
Thanks and Regards,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ever, today I must inform you about the sports competition which will be organized in ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Participants
...ation arrangements have been initiated. participants across the countries are expected to be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, look, so, after all, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27358490566 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03080643598 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683962264151 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6147454401 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194490670522 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627941121461 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049672175061 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102857193074 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523057351565 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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