You are moving to a new country; write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house.
In your letter, describe:
• yourself and your family
• which area you would like to live in
• and what facilities you need in the house
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in the hope that I may find suitable accommodation for me and my family.
My name is Salman Khan, and I am Professional Electrical Engineer. As I have recently received Permanent Residency (PR) of Australia; therefore, I will migrate with my family on May 26, 2019. Currently, I am working as a Marketing Manager in Unilever, which is one of the well-known process industries all over the world. There are total four members, including myself, in my household, in particular my wife, son, and a daughter.
We would really appreciate if the place of residence is located in the center of Sydney. However, a little far away from it might not be a problem, but commuting should not be more than 15 minutes’ drive. This is because all essential places, such as hospitals, schools and shopping centers, are located in that part of the city.
The desired accommodation is also expected to contain some facilities. There should be a bed in each room, a dining table, a washing machine, and kitchen ought to be equipped with a toaster, microwave oven, plus some cooking and dining utensils are essential.
I anticipate to hearing from you soon in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Salman khan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96172248804 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90774490392 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66985645933 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3243791714 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0874771869581 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324468178121 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381546872018 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501870378781 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422306507628 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.