You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about:• what course are you doing now• why y

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You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about:
• what course are you doing now
• why you are not satisfied with that course
• what course would you like to change to

Dear sir or madam,

My name is Ekta Purohit, student of a Computer Science course. My enrollment number is G190178. I am writing this letter for requesting you to change in my current course.

This program started from this year in our college. This class is for 1 year and i joined this course two weeks ago.

After attending some lectures i realised that , i already studied this subject in my higher secondary school. I really do not want to waste my term for this and that 's why i want to go for another course.

I find another interesting course which is Advanced Computer Science Course running in our college. I think this course is more suitable for me. So i really want to enroll for this class so i can explore my self in this field.

I am looking for positive response from your side.

Yours faithfully,
Ekta Purohit

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o waste my term for this and that s why i want to go for another course. I fi...
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...really want to enroll for this class so i can explore my self in this field. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, second, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60927152318 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4288703871 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.450387467 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133774990352 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566151598076 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813472057839 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751445349522 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647623961097 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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