You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course.
Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter explain:
• what course are you doing now
• why you are not satisfied with that course
• what course would you like to change to
Dear Mr Smith,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, and I am a first-year student of Bachelor of Arts in your college. I am writing this letter, I request you to switch my course.
I had a keen interest in playing Tennis owing to this I choose Physical Education basics course when I got admission in this college. Along with this, not only my class teacher but also my physical education teacher motivates me to take the basic-level course, if I want to pursue my career in tennis.
However, One month has been passed; still, they taught me theoretical work about this game which I already did during my school time. Owing to this, I feel that I am wasting my time to repeat the same things. Moreover, Physical Education Advanced level course is going to begin next week. If you allow, me then I would like to switch my basic level course with an advanced level course.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... course with an advanced level course. Looking forward to hearing from you. Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70760233918 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44468226829 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4995402275 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167416555391 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809462548088 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806246840941 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936047115863 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610747957657 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.