Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to reserve dwelling for a group of students visiting from Perth to Snowy mountains located in your region.
My name is Jameson Smith. I am the organiser of this trip from Western Australia to New south Wales which will be consisting of total 25 members, including 21 students and 4 teachers, including myself. However, as an organiser I must think ahead of booking accommodation and one of my colleagues recommended your Housing. Moreover, we are planning our visit on 21st July till 30th July.
In our group of 25 people, there are 12 females and 13 males, students and teachers inclusive. We are looking forward for 5 double queen bed rooms and 6 double king bed rooms. Furthermore, please be assure of accommodating non- smoking rooms, as it is educational tour. It will be very generous of you if we can get all kitchenette rooms because few students and instructors want to cook their light meals by themselves.
Please forward me all the details including the availability, cost and extra amenities, if available. I would really appreciate all your help.
I look forward to hearing from you at earliest convenience
Yours faithfully,
Jameson Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...Australia to New south Wales which will be consisting of total 25 members, including 21 stude...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you at earliest convenience Yours faithfully, Jameson Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88407063354 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696517412935 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8352423203 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27955254596 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764970718955 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852624520614 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14742769391 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101359824012 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.