Dear John,
I am writing this letter to invite you to join my this years holiday plan. I planned to visit Malaysia, Thailand and Singapore; its a two week round trip that covers major parts of the country that will give a true representation of the historical and culture sites of that particular region. I am certain we will enjoy alot, as we enjoyed last years vacation in Maldives. It is a good season to travel because we will get some extra holidays of Christmas at the end and off-course the weather is also very supportive for tourism within this time period.
We will explore all the three Countries along with a travel guide who will arrange all the necessary bookings and site seeing schedules for us. This travel guide used to work with World Wild Federation and have deep knowledge about the places that are usually unseen by the individual tourists. I do not want to enjoy this journey alone as i also need my friend with exceptional photography skills that can capture those beautiful moments so you do not have any excuse for missing this plan.
Hoping to hear from you soon with utmost urgency.
Kind Regards,
Ibrahim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...visit Malaysia, Thailand and Singapore; its a two week round trip that covers major...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ulture sites of that particular region. I am certain we will enjoy alot, as we e...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of that particular region. I am certain we will enjoy alot, as we enjoyed last y...
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Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tmost urgency. Kind Regards, Ibrahim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43464576479 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4367811536 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149717358146 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618914487486 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078257874427 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107160141695 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165959371874 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.