You are planning a two weeks vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away Write a letter to your neighbor In this letter Tell your neighbor that you are going away Ask you neighbor totake care of your house for you Explain w

dear jhon
i hope this letter find you best of health and spirit, as we are sharing best neighbor ,i need your help and cooperation because i am going my vacation trip to india ,hence please care home and yards

I hope you will do better care, august 15 i will go up to two weeks so would you collect my couriers and letters in this period i told to postman handover my parcel to you home.Although my one the fiend mr david will visit regularly to water the garden and feed my pet dog ,one more think please turn on out side light in each night as well as switch off on morning
if you have any doubts regarding parcel or other thinks i will be available in whatsapp NO:-8891796351 all time ,i will reply as soon as possible .i hope you will do perfect
i will be back on september first

your rooney

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear jhon i hope this letter find you best ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
dear jhon i hope this letter find you best of healt...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... spirit, as we are sharing best neighbor ,i need your help and cooperation because...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pirit, as we are sharing best neighbor ,i need your help and cooperation because ...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... need your help and cooperation because i am going my vacation trip to india ,hen...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...use i am going my vacation trip to india ,hence please care home and yards I ho...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hope you will do better care, august 15 i will go up to two weeks so would you co...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... my couriers and letters in this period i told to postman handover my parcel to y...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... postman handover my parcel to you home.Although my one the fiend mr david will visit re...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to water the garden and feed my pet dog ,one more think please turn on out side l...
^^
Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... pet dog ,one more think please turn on out side light in each night as well as switch o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...doubts regarding parcel or other thinks i will be available in whatsapp NO:-88917...
^
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...able in whatsapp NO:-8891796351 all time ,i will reply as soon as possible .i hope...
^^
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...le in whatsapp NO:-8891796351 all time ,i will reply as soon as possible .i hope ...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l time ,i will reply as soon as possible .i hope you will do perfect i will be b...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...time ,i will reply as soon as possible .i hope you will do perfect i will be ba...
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Line 6, column 2, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... possible .i hope you will do perfect i will be back on september first your...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e back on september first your rooney
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, regarding, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23870967742 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2833970713 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690322580645 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 155.0 16.3608247423 947% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 657.0 76.5299724578 858% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 155.0 16.8248392259 921% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 4.34317383033 1128% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291503236009 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.291503236009 0.0766984524023 380% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146266201671 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100652775212 0.0580467560999 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 76.0 8.37731958763 907% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -60.47 70.7449484536 -85% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 60.2 7.45979381443 807% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.5 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.57 7.59969072165 179% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 64.0 8.54432989691 749% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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