You are professional and you are planning to work abroad. You have come across an employment agency on the internet that hires people from your country to send to other countries. Write a letter to urgency. In your letter
Right reasons why you want to work abroad
Describe what kind of company or organisation you want to work with
State your expectation from the job
Dear sir,
Greetings! This letter is in reference to show interest in an online advertisement for hiring IT professionals overseas, which grabs my interest actually. I have been appointed as a senior technician for five years; however, no growth opportunities are seen throughout my experience because of limited progress in my country. Therefore, I tried to hand on with foreign organisations that would definitely helps me to prosper .
After accomplishing my training period at Chandigarh centre, I was moved to IBM Bangalore observing my achievements and targets. What I desire renowned company work is being done with collaboration. On the top of it, IBM branch would be my priority as I have an experience and got acquainted with their norms thoroughly.
Some Expectations! Note only I will provide a constructive service to the institution, but lucrative compensation is a prerequisite. Lastly, flexible working hours will be preferred because walking on the computer really makes a person fatigue.
Lastly, I have enclosed my detailed resume with this letter and I request you to intimate me as soon as you find any opportunity for me.
Yours truly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hat would definitely helps me to prosper . After accomplishing my training period...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, lastly, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2972972973 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27833574522 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3036115909 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136182705902 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518779927076 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572337774829 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774138922423 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635717039132 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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