You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
Explain who you are
Describe your complaint
Say what you think should be done about it.
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction based on the items I purchased from the newyork supermarket on the 20th Jan 2017.
Firstly, being a patron of this supermarket for about 5 years now. I prefer to buy all the necessary items from your store and most of my friend even have tried your store based on my recommendation. I purchased some of the accessories for my mobile and laptop, on the 20th January 2017.
Secondly, upon unboxing, I found the equipment’s to be defective because I cannot hear the sound from the earphones and the charger proved to be useless because of its inability to charge my laptop.
Thirdly, I expect you to either kindly replace the defective pieces or return the money back to me. I would also like to advise you to repeal and replace the defective items to avoid unavoidable circumstances in the future.
Best
Faizal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-02-05 | FaizalReza | 61 | view |
| 2017-02-05 | FaizalReza | 68 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...based on my recommendation. I purchased some of the accessories for my mobile and laptop, o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91864878155 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0114281889 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160880896392 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609091398382 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443816891797 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776873721171 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549955303728 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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