you are studying for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
- Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
-Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off
-say how qualification helps your job and company.
Dear Mr.Troy
I am writing this letter to ask for your permission about taking 3 days off. As you know I have been studying the CFA certification for over 2 years. I am going to take the exam soon so it would be great for me if you allowed me to take 3 days off to prepare the test.
I know that the volume of work in 3 days is too much but If you agree with my application I will work overtime after the exam to catch up the duties. I will make sure that nothing is out of control.
This certification is really important for my position in our firm. It would help me have solid knowledge about some problems that I am dealing while working. By completing the exam, I also will qualify for some international projects which help to boost up our company’s revenue.
Yours faithfully.
Duc Tran
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Troy
Dear Mr.Troy I am writing this letter to ask for ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... after the exam to catch up the duties. I will make sure that nothing is out of c...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36842105263 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62627755483 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5409003122 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289824587767 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954226001567 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580663954346 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168661754621 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642686901519 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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