You are studying for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it Write a letter to your manager In your letter Ask for some time off to complete a qualification Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off Say how

Good morning,Sir.
I hope you are doing well and having good time.
As i have previously mentioned , my current machine learning course at sclaer is on going
will end by this may 2023.I am really finding it difficult to bifurcate proper time between work and study
so i believe a focused week study would help me get strong skill sets to practically use it in our company.
Our recent project has many opportunities of development and modification which would be definealtly loved
by our client, using machinelearning i am planning to create chatbots and few automation which will help us
smoothening work process and work even more efficiently.
The course offers varied skills of python, sql, tableue , tensorflow, big data, machine learning, statistics,
numpy and pandas.All of it can be very useful in future projects also help us get bigger and better projects.
I plan to take our company on new upgraded level by learning them and practically using them on each project
we get on a week onwards.
So, I wold like to request a week off to study from 23rd February 2023 to 1st March 2023, i will be using this
time to study this skills and then practical functions so i can make sure about
its process flow and bring it on in our work projects.

Yours Sincerly,
Divya Shah

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sir
Good morning,Sir. I hope you are doing well and having ...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d time. As i have previously mentioned , my current machine learning course at s...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...nt machine learning course at sclaer is on going will end by this may 2023.I am really...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne learning course at sclaer is on going will end by this may 2023.I am really fi...
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Suggestion: I
...is on going will end by this may 2023.I am really finding it difficult to bifur...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rcate proper time between work and study so i believe a focused week study would ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...proper time between work and study so i believe a focused week study would help...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ication which would be definealtly loved by our client, using machinelearning i a...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... by our client, using machinelearning i am planning to create chatbots and few ...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun automation seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little automation'.
Suggestion: little automation
...ng i am planning to create chatbots and few automation which will help us smoothening work p...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts and few automation which will help us smoothening work process and work even m...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to smoothen' or 'smoothen'.
Suggestion: to smoothen; smoothen
...and few automation which will help us smoothening work process and work even more efficie...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rs varied skills of python, sql, tableue , tensorflow, big data, machine learning,...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... big data, machine learning, statistics, numpy and pandas.All of it can be very u...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...earning, statistics, numpy and pandas.All of it can be very useful in future proj...
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Line 11, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d practically using them on each project we get on a week onwards. So, I wold li...
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Line 13, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m 23rd February 2023 to 1st March 2023, i will be using this time to study this...
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Line 13, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to 1st March 2023, i will be using this time to study this skills and then pract...
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Line 14, column 15, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...3, i will be using this time to study this skills and then practical functions so ...
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Line 14, column 59, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... skills and then practical functions so i can make sure about its process flow ...
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Line 14, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tical functions so i can make sure about its process flow and bring it on in our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84304932735 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72866448589 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.823057168 44.8134815571 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.285714286 76.5299724578 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 16.8248392259 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159457211075 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753185988292 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810756818578 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544778262847 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666669635535 0.0580467560999 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 8.37731958763 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.