Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Divya, a resident of Hyderabad for 14 years writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the renovation of the local airport.
I live at Champapet road, which is hardly 10 minutes away from the airport along with my family members. I read about the expansion of Rajiv Gandhi International Airport in yesterday’s newspaper and could not resist myself to express the disagreement.
Although we are living here for 14 years knowing that there is an airport nearby, we never regretted about this because there were only 3-4 flights which take off in a day and do not cause much noise pollution. But, if this airport expands now, the local residents may get affected due to noise and air pollution coming from it. Moreover, not only the children get distracted from their studies, but also the elder people may get affected by severe attacks, such as hearing and heart problems.
I, on behalf of residents, request you to publish an editorial in your newspaper regarding the problems the expansion of the local airport would cause to the local people.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Diva Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.109375 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73170504568 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7234787586 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239662632147 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967596184301 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716256353007 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134206275792 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723860508672 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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