You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some
problems with the internet connection in your room.
Write to the supervisor of your residence. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Inform him / her of the situation
Request that the problem be fixed
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to a problem that I have encountered recently with the internet connection in my dormitory room.
My name is Rahi Honarvar and I am studying computer and technology at Alef College who is living in on-campus accommodation, block A, room 24.
Since a few days ago I have learned that there has been some problem with my internet connection. Although I can connect to the internet while I am in the main hall, the connection is lost in my room. Consequently, I cannot work on my dissertation at nights due to the lack of access to the internet.
I would like to ask for your help in order to solve the problem which caused me some inconveniences and I have difficulties fulfilling my thesis that should be accomplished till the end of month.
Thanks for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pus accommodation, block A, room 24. Since a few days ago I have learned that ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75949367089 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9750336449 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9221429604 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238979396325 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104659396496 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436450769587 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120659737442 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366138193377 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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