Dear John,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am planning to apply 3 days annual leave because our financial year has been finished and the new year plan has not confirmed yet. I supposed that it is a great time to relax and be prepare for new projects.
I checked the calendar last night, we have 3 public holidays which is next Friday, Monday and the following Thursday. If I could take a break on next Tuesday, Wednesday and Friday, I would have 8 days for my vacation, and also this is not the peak season in our business, a wide range of our clients will go to the holiday as well.
During my annual leave, my team member could manage 90% of daily tasks such as replay general email and chat with our client online. I will be able to answer the phone if we have some urgent business. Every night I could check email and arrange the work if need.
I hope you could approve my application at your convenience.
King regards.
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lax and be prepare for new projects. I checked the calendar last night, we hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, i suppose, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3687150838 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26607770006 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.863250225 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162338817278 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582498590817 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495802223734 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989288021054 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479785297498 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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