You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager in this letter
Explain Why you want to take time off .
Give details of the amount of time you need.
Suggest how you work could be converted while you are away.
Dear Mr. Singh
I am writing this letter to express my concern about leaves which I want next week. I am Urvashi and working in project department on a senior executive post. I am pleased to inform you that my cousin sister's marriage has been fixed on 24th march. Therefore, I have to go to Arga next week with my family as it is a family ceremony. Eventually, I want to apply for the leave.
There will be several functions start from 20 march. Its crucial time for company thus I do not want much time off. We will go on 23rd march and will be back on 25th . Hence, 3 leaves are required.
I am glad to tell you that I have completed all the prior work of next meeting and will finish rest of my work by giving extra time after working hours. In my absence, Mr. Verma will take care at the time of any emergency.
Now, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am writing this letter to express my concern about leaves which I want next w...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... department on a senior executive post. I am pleased to inform you that my cousin...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has been fixed on 24th march. Therefore, I have to go to Arga next week with my f...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as it is a family ceremony. Eventually, I want to apply for the leave. There...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nctions start from 20 march. Its crucial time for company thus I do not want much...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o on 23rd march and will be back on 25th . Hence, 3 leaves are required. I am ...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time after working hours. In my absence, Mr. Verma will take care at the time of...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...after working hours. In my absence, Mr. Verma will take care at the time of any ...
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Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e at the time of any emergency. Now, I am looking forward to hearing from you...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Urvashi .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...om you. Yours sincerely Urvashi .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31578947368 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24211896741 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66081871345 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2803913954 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.7692307692 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263737607614 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792538048678 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697520083411 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144385406086 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425376698507 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.