To manager,
I Want to inform that I required some unpaid leave from my job schedule.
Let give a glance at the reason for leaving. Actually my younger sister studied in Ontario and Now she had completed their degree in International Business Management. She cardial requests to me that Join their convocation ceremony which going to held on 21st of the November. Obviously, its time to pride and honour my family but due to health issues, my parents fail to attend it. As an elder sister's obligation, I have to attend it for the sake of my adorable sister. Along with this, their birthday is arrive on the next day. She is very curious to celebrate it with me.
Therefore I required fifteen days' leave for attending convocation and birthday party from the 18th of November to the 3rd of December. As you know, I have some responsibility and obligation towards the company. According to my scheduled, there have two meetings during leave period one is with Chinese delegates and other with Us delegates but it due to some delegate postpone to Next month. Further, the rest of the clerical and managerial work will be managed and supervise by my Assitant Mr. khanna In the previous project, he reveals excellence in a resourceful manner.
I look forward to your response. Thank you in advance
Regards,
Pawanchopra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
To manager, I Want to inform that I required some unpa...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me unpaid leave from my job schedule. Let give a glance at the reason for lea...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...eir convocation ceremony which going to held on 21st of the November. Obviously, its...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sisters'' or 'sister's'?
Suggestion: sisters'; sister's
... parents fail to attend it. As an elder sisters obligation, I have to attend it for the...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'arrived'.
Suggestion: arrived
...ter. Along with this, their birthday is arrive on the next day. She is very curious to...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y curious to celebrate it with me. Therefore I required fifteen days leave for atten...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 551, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a resourceful manner" with adverb for "resourceful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...previous project, he reveals excellence in a resourceful manner. I look forward to your response. Th...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to your response. Thank you in advance Regards, Pawanchopra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89380530973 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74410495243 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8393367736 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128180829483 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458605000507 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492695724099 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970109252769 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697867125738 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.