You are working for a company. Your Computer is giving some problem and it is affecting your work. Write a letter to the manager in your letter
-describe the problem
-explain how it is affecting your work
-write what you want him to do regarding it
Dear Sir
I am a worker of you are a steamed company who work as a web designer from last two years. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to draw your immediate attention on the computer problem which I am facing from last few days.
As, I am working on the news website and it is very significant project, which we give to the client on next Monday as per the contract. The main thing about it, I completed 50% work but 50% work is still remaining, which I have to complete in certain days, but I am unable to do it. Because my computer is not working well from last few days, when I start working, it suddenly shut down and sometimes it becomes in the position of hang, which create interruption in my work and hinder me to complete it.
It is a essential to unravel the problem as early as possible so that I can complete my project on the time. Further more, I deem that the company computers are very old and need to be reform. If it is possible, bring some more new computers, which contain new features and have a long lasting life.
I would be very grateful if you take some suitable steps to solve this problem and take my suggestion positively. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
17th febraury 2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ttention on the computer problem which I am facing from last few days. As, I a...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... and hinder me to complete it. It is a essential to unravel the problem as ear...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours faithfully 17th febraury 2018 Aman
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Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 17th febraury 2018 Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3686440678 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41655852383 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580508474576 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4797288772 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207489566063 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743319374801 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341136306724 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861536882178 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05684346349 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.