You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Dear Jot,
My name is Kinu, and I got your name and address from Pen Pal International. I am very glad to have to write to you and become pen pals.
Let me introduce myself first. I am currently working as a Visa Filling Officer in International Company. I graduated from Punjabi University, Chandigarh with a Master in Computer Application in July 2016. I am enjoying my job but I still want to grab some international exposure hence, I thought to get a doctoral degree in computer science and will file an application this September.
As far as, my hobbies are concerned I like to cook food whenever I have some free time. Apart from this, I like reading novels, listening to sweet and light music, and playing basketball. I am interested in listening to stories from elderly ones.
I will be visiting New York this July as my sister is going to get married. The marriage is on 8th July and I will be there for at least three weeks. If you are free, I would be very happy to meet you in person. We can spend a day together if you are ready.
Well, let me finish here. I am eagerly waiting for your reply to this letter. I would like to know your interest and your life. I hope that we can become good friends.
Yours Faithfully,
Kinu
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- Many crimes often related to consumption of alcohol Some people think that best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol Do you think this is an effective measure against crime What other suggestions can you suggest 73
- Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians What are the reasons for this Is it a positive or negative development 78
- In some countries most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home 78
- You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English Part of the course is a summer work placement program Unfortunately you have just learnt from the school that this program has now been cancelled Write a letter to the School 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r in Computer Application in July 2016. I am enjoying my job but I still want to ...
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Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill file an application this September. As far as, my hobbies are concerned I li...
^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ke to know your interest and your life. I hope that we can become good friends. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, still, well, apart from, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4025974026 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61418818621 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6374057888 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232314545307 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719973694977 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889038715843 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117872148562 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948851069272 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.