You are a young entrepreneur and want to start a new business. Write a letter to your friend seeking some suggestions for the same. Include
-let him know about new line of business that you intend to enter into
-let him know why you consider him as an important person for advice
-seek his advice
Dear Jannie
I trust you must be doing well. It has been a long time we had any discussion on personal or professional matter. It's delightful information that I'm venturing into 'Apparel business' following your footsteps.
As you know, i have a passion to do something fashionista people. Recently, i have completed my 2 years advance diploma in clothing from prominent 'Pearls Academy' in Mohali. Now I Am excited to open my own boutique. I always aspire to do something different, therefore, i want to offer the most latest and exclusive designs to my clients. I express my heartfelt gratitude for your success rate in the fashion industry. As you told me earlier, this business would not require gigantic investment but needs positive attitude, work spirit and perseverance.
I seek your advice regarding some retailer and wholesalers from where i can attain acem quality fabrics for my customers. I cannot reach the zenith level where you're at present, however, i believe your expertise will prove beneficial to maximize my work efficiency.
I hope an instant reply from your end.
Best regards
Jennifer
- Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss and give your opinion. 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...matter. Its delightful information that Im venturing into Apparel business followi...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to do something different, therefore, i want to offer the most latest and exclu...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'latest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: latest
...fferent, therefore, i want to offer the most latest and exclusive designs to my clients. I ...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ome retailer and wholesalers from where i can attain acem quality fabrics for my ...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
.... I cannot reach the zenith level where youre at present, however, i believe your ex...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h level where youre at present, however, i believe your expertise will prove bene...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...level where youre at present, however, i believe your expertise will prove benef...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...icial to maximize my work efficiency. I hope an instant reply from your end. ...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...maximize my work efficiency. I hope an instant reply from your end. Best re...
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Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt reply from your end. Best regards Jennifer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14835164835 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88300321249 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.758241758242 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1242130581 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0769230769 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137315468709 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446284480508 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399257894301 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765251217182 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016305266897 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.