You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter:
• apologize for the mistake
• find out how important the book is to him/her
• say what you will do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to for not returning your book that I borrowed from you on time.
I borrowed the Advanced Marketing and Advertising book from you last week as the book was really important for me to prepare for my MBA exams. The book is very nice with proper explanation and illustrations and really helped me during my exam. Although, I promised to return the book after the exams, I forgot to do the same as when my exams were finished, I suffered from fever. I realise that you have returned to your home country I sincerely regret for not returning the book as promised
Please let me know that if this book is really important for you in your studies and will help you in preparing your exams or else you can manage without this book.
I will post the book through direct airmail today itself to your house address and it will reach to you within a day or two, moreover, I will inform you the proof of delivery number so that you can track the package. Please inform me once you will receive the book.
I sincerely ask for forgiveness for the inconvenience caused to you for not giving back your book after my exams.
Keep in touch. See you soon.
Best Wishes,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joyous time. I am writing this letter to for not returning your book that I borro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t for not returning the book as promised Please let me know that if this book is ...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Best Wishes, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49785407725 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32937714854 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545064377682 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4855166981 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6153846154 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406045568314 0.216113520407 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151553640338 0.0766984524023 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111412340708 0.0603063233224 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232942605921 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909641554102 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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