You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you offer a ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain detailed the concert.
• Why you are unable to go
• How can your friend receive the ticket?
Dear Ben,
How have you been?. It’s been a long time since we last met. I am writing in regards to offer you premium tickets for live music concert as I am unable to attend this show.
To elucidate as you remember, last time when we spoke I told you about a music concert which is happening in our city this month. Well, the band which will be performing is Coldplay and it is their first concert in India. Moreover, the tickets are almost sold out as they have a huge fan following in India. The musical event will take place at Jawahar Lal Nehru Stadium in Delhi and will start at 7 pm on Saturday evening.
I was looking forward to attending this live concert as Coldplay is one of my favourite bands but unfortunately, I have to travel overseas for the product launch of my company.
Since you are also a die-hard fan of this band I suggest this is a great opportunity to listen to live music which will definitely rejuvenate you. The tickets offer to seat in the balcony section of the stadium from where you can have clear visibility of musicians. Why don’t you come over this weekend to my apartment to collect the tickets in person?
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ben, How have you been?. It's been a lon...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ng time since we last met. I am writing in regards to offer you premium tickets for live musi...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r the product launch of my company. Since you are also a die-hard fan of this ban...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, moreover, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4845814978 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40439866791 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1701276807 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280492422097 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103981224568 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077040965022 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166601787722 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822072290752 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.