You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school.
Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter:
• say what job you have applied for
• explain why you want this job
• suggest what information the teacher should include
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire about some official papers which I forgot at your hotel yesterday. have you found such documents?
To elucidate I had organized a business meet in “The Mercury” conference room with foreign delegates from Japan at your property yesterday. The meeting lasted for a few hours till noon after which we had lunch therefore I believe it was during this time I may have forgotten these papers in the meeting room. For your information the papers were kept in a blue transparent file near to the projector table. The file contains confidential papers regarding the financial turnover of the company therefore loss of these documents would put my job would be risk.
Hence I would request you inform me and keep these documents in your safe custody if your staff manages to find it so that I can send someone from my office to collect it.
I look forward to your immediate help.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...which I forgot at your hotel yesterday. have you found such documents? To elucida...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ents would put my job would be risk. Hence I would request you inform me and keep ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9012345679 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62951370521 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691358024691 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1737658911 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199694751142 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838530142799 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502051136194 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112226968205 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368035282539 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.