You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with the job offer I received from your company. I am extremely grateful that I have given a chance to work in your prestigious institution but unfortunately I would not be able to accept the offer.
Let me explain my situation in more details. Recently, I joined a dance group in one of the famous centers in town. I decided to pursue my passion in dancing so I applied as dance instructor, fortunately I was hired last week. Although my schedule is tight, I am actually enjoying teaching youngsters about dancing. I was unlucky during my school days because I did not make my goal in becoming a popular dancer.
Honestly it took me a week to decide wether I will grab the chance to weigh in my option because I have known your company for a decade now and I am aware of the victorious accomplishments you have. I hope that in the near future, I would be given an opportunity again to work and be part of your success.
Thank you once again.
Yours sincerely,
Jessica Lolarga
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in connection w...
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Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in to work and be part of your success. Thank you once again. Yours sincer...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k you once again. Yours sincerely, Jessica Lolarga
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, honestly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60638297872 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79323699835 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0306026885 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13873125908 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533818634625 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06234932909 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108144362355 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699396706528 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.