You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
» Explain the reason why you decline the offer
» Express your gratitude
» Explain why you like your current job very much.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to decline your generous job offer for the position of the Database Administrator.
I am a potential candidate to whom you made a job offer. I would like to extend my thanks for such an offer, especially in such a company with good reputation. However, I have to reject your business proposal due to the responsibilities that I have at my current job. I am involved with a project that is an order of one of the best clients of my company and consequently I cannot leave the project.
It was an honor for me to be chosen by a renowned company such yours. It proves that I was qualified enough to get the position and furthermore, my knowledge in computer and technology is appropriate for the mentioned job.
Through the course of three years in Smith Company I have learnt an incredible amount and I believe that it is time for me to do something for this company by using my knowledge and experience in this field.
Once again I would like to thank you for your job offer.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...candidate to whom you made a job offer. I would like to extend my thanks for such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58201058201 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82668460437 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7884524765 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232439774497 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107542266077 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841173839495 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149581046741 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982400714744 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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