You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also sugg

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my utmost satisfaction and commend you for making my this birthday the most memorable event of my life, which I celebrated at your place last week ie on 4th of June’ 2018.

Let me tell you in details. I got to know from one of my friends that your restaurant is known for making birthday celebrations a fascinating event and so I thought to give it a try. Moreover, it was worth it. All the food items including my favourite lentil soup and yummy tortilla made up of whole wheat grain were mouth licking. The best part, however, was the ambience. It was so cosy and friendly that my friends were almost startled at first. Not to forget, the staff was all the time on the toe to serve us. I simply love every bit of it.

Last but not least, I would like to suggest you ”keep up your like this forever”, as I have seen cases who let their customers down after a little success. Additionally, just a little bit of improvement in the waiting area will gonna attract more customers. Rest, you were fantastic.

Before winding up, can I request you to please share the pictures you clicked that night?

Looking forward to your reply.
Neha

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...y tortilla made up of whole wheat grain were mouth licking. The best part, however, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... a little success. Additionally, just a little bit of improvement in the waiting area will...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...of improvement in the waiting area will gonna attract more customers. Rest, you were ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56164383562 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.541365623 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657534246575 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6921256511 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247734811852 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727773372001 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486729083338 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122046835707 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318463855381 0.0580467560999 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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