You did a one day course at a local college, but you are unhappy about it.Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter,- Details about the course- Why you are unhappy- Give some suggestions

Hello Dean,

I am writing a complaint about your low quality “one-day-course.” The course is on the topic of “robot companion faking turning test to simulate human emotions.” It is good to be free, but it totally wasted my precious one-day vacation.
I am a miserable basement dweller and always day-dreaming to have an android companion. I thought I can attend your course and show support for future robotic development. However, what your college and you lecturers are demitting so much bias, I can’t stand by this anymore. The goal of engineering, especially anthropology architect is about mastering artificial process mimicking nature, not ethics bluffing. While all you trying to fit in the one-day-course is the danger of robot taking away human jobs, and good young man marrying underaged androids.

I hope you are aware that you are receiving public grand for public education, not money from interest groups serving the very few. The general principle of such one-day-course is either to spread scientific discovery or generate a healthy discussion in a public forum. Your pitiful, cheap political agenda ruined everything.

This letter is not mean to be a lawsuit threat or cease or desist request. I am here simply trying to the voice of many young men like me. You can talk about robots, but robots are human, too.

Yours most humble regards,
Andrew

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...-dreaming to have an android companion. I thought I can attend your course and sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24888888889 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21030439694 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697777777778 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1323858241 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8461538462 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239933160106 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728809703352 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449609395324 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115681176507 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448220089334 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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