Many fear to answer an absolute term in research, but studying societies’ characteristics must not omit any major cities. Before going further, I must clarify few vocabulary items. A city is defined as a place with large group of people, and with a cathedral, according to Merriam-Webster’s dictionary. Or in more simple, and secular term, a place with a lot of people. Society, is an aggregation of people. To this point, the essay needs not go any further. You can’t study an aggregation of people by “not study a lot of people.” This is not how research works. When sampling groups, a researcher must not voluntarily stay blind to a group of people, especially by choice. I not here to argue the topic is wrongful or misleading, but other’s answer probably willfully ignorant about the fact society is people, lots of people is city, by “must not” study the majority of majority subset, it is ridiculous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fear seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many fears'.
Suggestion: Many fears
Many fear to answer an absolute term in research,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 2235.4752809 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 156.0 442.535393258 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 4.55969084622 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37323260758 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 215.323595506 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 704.065955056 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.2236572195 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.21951772744 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215587266748 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821825206262 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725736009651 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215587266748 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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