You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time however; you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine.
- explain what you like about the cafeteria
- say what is wrong
- suggest how it could be improved.
To whom it may concern,
My name is Amir and I have been your customer since three years ago and I think I ate all your menu during these years. I am writing to express concern about your business and I would be great full if you could change something in your café to improve it. Firstly, I should say that the quality of your foods are decreasing and it goes back to your first hand materials, which are not fresh enough. I should mention that your staff are not friendly like past and they are too serious, and they do not have goof communication with clients. Finally, I think that you need to change the interior design of your café. I mean that, your café needs to be reconstructed with new materials to encourage students to come here.
If you need further help, feel free and contact me by number 9876543210 or email@gmail.com
Sincerely yours,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-23 | Singh009 | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-20 | Amir Nazaripoor | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number 9876543210 or email@gmail.com Sincerely yours,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53205128205 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48436101209 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7514825072 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198134506789 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940983937596 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575562363436 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694155772879 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768164725961 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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