You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighbourhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms.
Write to the gym manager. In your letter:
explain who you are
describe the problem exactly
make suggestions to improve the gym
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr James,
I would like to draw your attention to the gym cleanness and suggest some ideas to improve the situation.
My name is Julia Timofeeva and I am a vivid fan of working-out and healthy lifestyle. I have recently joined this club and find every opportunity to exercise regularly. I am fond of modern equipment, water quality of swimming pool and yoga masters professionalism.
Unfortunately, the hygienic situation could have been more satisfactory. Specifically, dirt on towels and equipment is noticeable. I am convinced that neat and pure conditions of sport facilities must be mandatory and not optional, thus I want to propose several ideas for improvement.
Firstly, It could be a good idea if the club personnel monitor the tidiness level more frequently. Secondly, the staff need to organize verbal and written notifications to prevent other club members from violations. Lastly, mild fine system could also be a great motivator for offenders.
I would appreciate it if you give this matter your immediate attention.
Yours Faithfully,
Julia Timofeeva
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| 2020-07-15 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 79 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16656811929 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707602339181 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4603567499 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114156079603 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380368110235 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504102790743 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622826190773 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307768985589 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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