Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Imi who live in 20 Rose Drive, Paramatta Street, Nsw. I am writing to you concerning an issue in my residential neighbourhood.
Recently, two complex building have started in my street which are hugely influence on its local cleaning. Also, these time there are crowded by many casual workers, who do not enough pay attention to keep clean the street. I used to go goggling every afternoon in pedestrian road, but presently I am facing with lots of construction left over such as nails and bricks moreover some takeaway food bags on grand existing, which has made it unsafe.
I would appreciate if you could send a notice to those builders and remind to be more responsible about their rubbish. In addition, I recommend if it is possible, provide at least an extra council local street cleaning in this place.
Looking forward to a prompt action.
Your fourth fully,
Imi.Bkk
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ction left over such as nails and bricks moreover some takeaway food bags on gran...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Bkk
...ompt action. Your fourth fully, Imi.Bkk
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, at least, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94838709677 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69215532839 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.806451612903 0.622605031667 130% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3282206183 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178262368608 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064636858679 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465134873328 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753799345306 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500183919664 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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