You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the local newspaper. In your letter,•say what kind of restaurant it is and where it is located•describe the meal you had•and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting

Essay topics:

You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the local newspaper. In your letter,
• say what kind of restaurant it is and where it is located
• describe the meal you had
• and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to your newspaper to share the experience I had at "The Tommy Thai" restaurant which I visited last week on Father's day with my family.

The restaurant is located in the downtown area, near the river, opposite the City Center. The restaurant offers vegetarian authentic Thai cuisine. The ambiance of the restaurant is welcoming, service is very quick, staff members are courteous and friendly, the open lagoon view seating is the great place to enjoy a private dinner. Moreover, they have traditional Thai shows every Saturday night from 7.00 pm to midnight.

This restaurant offers a wide variety of dishes to its patrons. I ordered Chicken lollipop in appetizer, Duck curry and mango fried rice for the main course with Thai ice tea. We winded up our dinner with delicious traditional Thai coconut ice cream.

I would highly recommend this restaurant for food lovers. This is one of the restaurants in the town where food lovers can get authentic Thai cuisine.

I am hoping you would share my experience in your food section so that more people can know about this restaurant.

Yours faithfully,
Kajal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fers vegetarian authentic Thai cuisine. The ambiance of the restaurant is welcoming...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ous traditional Thai coconut ice cream. I would highly recommend this restaurant...
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Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... restaurant. Yours faithfully, Kajal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08854166667 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63427902817 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682291666667 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9264962256 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212781502105 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736499638342 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443768968413 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10806340157 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414438729857 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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