You have been asked to organise a social event for your company. Write an email to your colleagues. In the email says,
- What suggestions have been made.
- What you think about suggestions
- What you have decided to do.
Hi Folks,
I am writing this correspondence because our organisation is planning to have year-end-party for all of us.
I would like to make some good options for this event.
At First, I choose to have event in building reception hall in weekdays. Another one is celebrating that in a good locality hotel on the weekend. And lastly, arrange a picnic trip to nearby tourist destination and make party at that location.
Here I would think about party at building reception hall would be enjoyable but there is space issue. Also, we unable to celebrate or allow load music inside building premises. Additionally, taking picnic trip nearby tourist destination will be fun for everyone but unfortunately some staff member would not come because of their house chores and family time with their children on weekends.
At last, I strongly recommend to have party at good locality hotel, where everyone would enjoy local cuisine, savour delicacies and hip-hop party music. I believe everyone would be interested to join for this and join the celebration.
Looking forward to see everyone in year-end-party. Thank you.
Your Truly,
Alan BB
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Folks, I am writing this correspondence because...
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Line 10, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend having'.
Suggestion: recommend having
...ren on weekends. At last, I strongly recommend to have party at good locality hotel, where ev...
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Line 10, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...recommend to have party at good locality hotel, where everyone would enjoy local ...
^^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...oin the celebration. Looking forward to see everyone in year-end-party. Thank you. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21505376344 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85252422227 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2324118921 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8333333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105415277062 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462808558422 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503441003099 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592693032514 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289844339436 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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