Dear sir,
The business meeting today in prudential fashion home was a grate one, we talked about fashion and it’s impact to the world at large. After the meeting we had wine and toasted to good days ahead.
After the meeting, we had the chance to go round the company especially the sewing department. As we were going round I saw an measurement specially used for body measurements, it is a unisex measurement machine. This Mechine take measurement according to how you want it to and the result is really beautiful and creative.
This Mechine will be very useful in our company for more accurate measurements. Because this Mechine also takes measurements according to the type of dress you are about to design, makes it easy for easy stitches and give’s you accurate fittings after the dress is done.
I’d ask Mrs prudential where her company got the measurement machine, she said she got it from China. So since will be going to chine in October I’d like to assist the company to by this beautiful equipment if you permit me sir.
Yours faithfully
Faith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d wine and toasted to good days ahead. After the meeting, we had the chance to ...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...epartment. As we were going round I saw an measurement specially used for body mea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85405405405 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60355434973 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2430785547 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179174455731 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667868107413 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037783524107 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961624262356 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027387877059 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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