In our world today, the population is increasing in many cities. Many people tend to mind their space due to the urbanization process, which has cause a loss in community sense and denies us knowing our neighbors. In this essay I will talk about the problem and the measure that can be taken to overcome it.
On the one hand, communication is essential and should be normalized amongst humans especially within the neighborhoods. Meanwhile, some people prefer to mind their space and family because, they do not want misunderstanding and deformation of character. Some people take advantage of the familiarity for instance, and begin to go to their neighbors even when they are not invited. While some starts involving in other people’s personal matters. This is the mean problem why people prefer a sedentary lifestyle in the residential areas.
On the other hand, people really need to know the importance of communication. More so, have some leave of communication skill, this will enable them strive without problem when knowing their neighbors. In our word today we need each other in one way or the other for example, your car broke down and you need to head out for an appointment. Due to good communication process in the Hood and love, you can talk to your neighbor and they will assist you immediately.
Finally, in this essay have talked about the problem and the measure that can be taken to over come lose of community sense in the neighborhood. in as much as we need to know our selves we still need to be cultured so we do not cross boundaries because, people’s way of life differs. So therefore we need to have that at the back of our minds.
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- In many cities the population is increasing Some says that the urbanization process denies us knowing our neighbours and this causes a loss of community sense what is the main problem with this What measure can be taken to overcome it 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ighbors even when they are not invited. While some starts involving in other people’s...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...of community sense in the neighborhood. in as much as we need to know our selves w...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
... because, people’s way of life differs. So therefore we need to have that at the back of our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79584775087 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80233240237 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525951557093 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5063927727 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275430520583 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095960300386 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926359878022 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196776047529 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157150588834 0.056905535591 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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