Dear sir,
The business meeting today in prudential fashion home was a great one; we talked about fashion and it’s impact to the world at large. After the meeting we had wine and toasted to good days ahead.
After the meeting, we had the chance to go round the company especially the sewing department. As we were going round I saw a Mechine specially used for body measurements, it’s a unisex measurement machine. This Mechine take’s measurement according to how you want it to and the result is really beautiful and creative.
This Mechine will be very useful in our company for more accurate measurements. Because, this Mechine also takes measurements according to the type of dress you are about to design; and makes it perfect for easy stitches which give’s accurate fittings after the dress is made.
I’d ask Mrs prudential where her company got the measurement machine, she said she got it from China. So since I’ll be going to china in October I’d like to assist the company to get this beautiful equipment if you permit me sir.
Yours faithfully
Faith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58098964768 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5635819487 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177742250328 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659917167543 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362440096545 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938760497749 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240942245828 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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