In our world today, the population is increasing in many cities. Many people tend to mind their space due to the urbanization process, which has cause a loss in community sense and denies us knowing our neighbors. In this essay I will talk about the problem and the measure that can be taken to overcome it.
To begin with, communication is essential and should be normalized amongst humans especially within the neighborhoods. Meanwhile, some people prefer to mind their space and family because, they do not want misunderstanding and deformation of character. Some people take advantage of the familiarity for instance, and begin to go to their neighbors even when they are not invited. While some starts involving in other people’s personal matters. This is the mean problem why people prefer a sedentary lifestyle in the residential areas.
To continue, people really need to know the importance of communication. More so, have some leave of communication skill, this will enable them strive without problem when knowing their neighbors. In our word today we need each other in one way or the other. Also there should be a community arrangements for picnics and outing it will go along way to help the neighbors to know each other.
To conclude, in this essay have talked about how the problem and the measure hat can be taken to over come in as much as we need to know our selves we still need to be cultured so we do not cross boundaries. People like
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ighbors even when they are not invited. While some starts involving in other people’s...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...eed each other in one way or the other. Also there should be a community arrangement...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'arrangement'?
Suggestion: arrangement
...other. Also there should be a community arrangements for picnics and outing it will go along...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we do not cross boundaries. People like
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86454183267 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79729510829 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3696329201 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9230769231 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304780808237 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959877521773 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087965556192 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205974893896 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150888836047 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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