You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven t had time to visit your family Write a letter to your grandmother In your letter Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visi

Dear Granny,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to apologize as I was not able to find the time to meet with you in the recent month due to my busy study schedule.

As you know I am going to appear for my final exams next month and there is so much left to prepare. On top of that, I found that the robotics assignment submission date was one week earlier than I anticipated. This resulted in devoting my entire day and night to the assignment preparations and studies due to which I did not find the time to travel back home to meet you all.

After my finals next month, I have a break and was hoping to visit you during the same. We can go visit the local museum you have wanted to see for a long time. Also, could you please bake my favorite cookies before I come to meet you next month?

I can't wait to see you.

With love,
Jay

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ore I come to meet you next month? I cant wait to see you. With love, Jay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, you know, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11560693642 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11514888121 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6364201074 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253084214358 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1051053677 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649008857185 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149949783028 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686470967839 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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