You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working . In your letter
· describe the work you have been doing
· explain why you can no longer do this work
· recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Sir/Madam,
Myself Rinki Gupta, working as a volunteer with your NGO to campaign for anti-drugs and helping the youngsters who are addicted to consuming the drugs. Additionally, planting trees in the localities and encouraging people to take care of them and water them in routine. I am overwhelmed that some precious changes in someone’s life have been done by my support from last 5 years.
But, due to the transfer order to my father appeared recently we need to relocate to the other state Orissa. And I would not be able to continue the work with your organisation from the April month. I assure you that I will be doing such work as lot of blessings and satisfaction have been added to my soul while working under your guidance.
As I am working on some projects right now and found an another like-minded person who is ready to pursue the same. I would be glad to introduce him to you and carry on my projects with more zeal and enthusiasm. He resides in the vicinity of the NGO’s head-office and will come to see you tomorrow.
Looking forward for a positive response for him and would be glad to keep in touch with you and the team. Hope the NGO keeps on doing the charity and helping the society to be a better place.
Yours sincerely,
Rinki Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... As I am working on some projects right now and found an another like-minded per...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a like-minded' or 'another like-minded'.
Suggestion: a like-minded; another like-minded
...g on some projects right now and found an another like-minded person who is ready to pursue the same....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64192139738 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65064423068 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593886462882 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1147032785 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5833333333 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310143541242 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099586236737 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901847738973 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17188396485 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846881424479 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.