You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:
• describe the work you have been doing
• explain why you can no longer do this work
• recommend another person who is interested in the work.
Dear Dave,
I am one of the volunteers in your organisation working in the old-age department. I would like to inform you that I will not be able to continue serving your organisation from 20th June 2018.
I am involved in helping older people with different activities such as morning and evening walks, having food, changing clothes. My timing is 12:00 PM to 8:00 PM from Monday to Thursday and 10:00 AM to 8:00 AM on Saturdays.
My explanation for not continuing this work is that I have received call letter for admission in Xavier University in London. I will be required to join the college on 25th June 2018. I was waiting for this call letter for last four months while serving your organisation.
As I have always felt happy and satisfied while serving old age people, I would like to recommend one of my friends who is willing to work here. She lives just one block away and has experience in different volunteer activities especially for older people. Moreover, she has just now completed her graduation and will be available for one year.
I hope you will consider her profile in my place.
Yours sincerely,
xxx
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76767676768 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67730126185 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1255850581 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19276789584 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717961966166 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558842512422 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105750086103 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596429586918 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.