you have been sent an important document in a foreign language and you need it translated quickly. you have a friend who knows this language.
Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate an important document you have received. In your letter say
– Why is it important for you?
– How fast do you need it back?
– Why do you need his/her expertise?
Dear Hirota,
It's been so long since we last were in touch but, I haven't forgotten all the wonderful times that spent together in Tokyo a few years ago. I was wondering if you would give me a hand with some translations of university prospects which has been send by university of Kyoto.
In fact, I applied for a scholarship in the above university and they send me a letter regarding available courses and thier scholarships offering for 2019. Eventhough, I know japanese little bit, it's really difficult to understand all the content in here. A japanese course that I'm following is still in primitive level and that letter is uncomprehendible for me.
Application should be sent within upcomming two weeks as the perticular postgraduate degree programme will be commenced in next July. Your assitance in translating that letter is urgent as I need to meet deadlines.
I hope, you might not have difficulties to covert my letter to English language as you are fluent in both languages. Further, it's not so long ago that you completed your master degree. Therefor, I'm sure you might be familiar with these course contets.
It'll be a great help if you can do this as soon as possible. I'm waiting for your fast reply.
Best reagrds,
Sadamali.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...long since we last were in touch but, I havent forgotten all the wonderful times that ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
... of university prospects which has been send by university of Kyoto. In fact, I ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...g for 2019. Eventhough, I know japanese little bit, its really difficult to understand all...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...content in here. A japanese course that Im following is still in primitive level a...
^^
Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... are fluent in both languages. Further, its not so long ago that you completed your...
^^^
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...completed your master degree. Therefor, Im sure you might be familiar with these c...
^^
Line 11, column 62, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...if you can do this as soon as possible. Im waiting for your fast reply. Best re...
^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng for your fast reply. Best reagrds, Sadamali.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, regarding, so, still, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90654205607 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85574813418 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668224299065 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6589420848 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7692307692 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24395768558 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812528836996 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077213708368 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124835829862 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780204692411 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.