Dear Anisha,
How are you?. Hope everything is fine at your end.
A few months back, your showed interest in buying my bicycle, which I was reluctant to sell at that time. However, now I intend to sell that cycle as I have purchased a motorbike, owing to longer distance of travel to my work. This bicycle is now not in use anymore.
As you have already seen my bicycle, it is red in color. I had recently replaced its tyres and regularly service its brakes and gears to keep them free of rust and mud. The condition of the cycle is equivalent to the new cycle.
I think that you would love to purchase it as you have no private vehicle at present and this cycle could help you in short distance travels. My first preference would be to sell it to you but if you are not interested, kindly inform me, so that I can advertise it on the used vehicle website.
Awaiting your positive response.
Your friend,
Navpreet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...you have already seen my bicycle, it is red in color. I had recently replaced its tyres and ...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your positive response. Your friend, Navpreet kaur
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, i think, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49418604651 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37314015875 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5389966459 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4166666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410856479419 0.216113520407 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129337475585 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818626651352 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177599448189 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800320295877 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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