Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the change in my bookings. I am Rajat Shrivastav from Vadodara. I had booked your hotel from Airbnb for my visit to Kerala this month end. I had a booking for one night in a deluxe room.
I was traveling for my business meeting. Unfortunately, the meeting has shifted to the next month on 15th date, Friday. I want you to book a room for three guests from 14th to 18th November. Previously I was only gonna visit but now that the meeting is on Friday we have time to stay there on the weekend. I am planning to come along with my family so that they can see the beautiful nature of Kerala and relax at your hotel.
Hope this change in plan will not affect you much as I’m extending my stay with your hotel. Requesting you to kind give a confirmation within this week so that I can confirm the hotel booking with you else will have to look to other places.
Yours Faithfully,
Rajat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s. I am Rajat Shrivastav from Vadodara. I had booked your hotel from Airbnb for m...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for my visit to Kerala this month end. I had a booking for one night in a deluxe...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oking for one night in a deluxe room. I was traveling for my business meeting. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36312849162 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37725087949 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608938547486 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9802221907 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0833333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40690224303 0.216113520407 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131119605379 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892209888011 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276380712367 0.12726935374 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448198347064 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.