Dear Kenny,
I hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. I am writing to apologize for not being able to join you for the theater programme this weekend, that we have been planning from last month.
The reason for my disability is, last Sunday, I met an accident on the road and eventually broke my leg. I was unconscious when I was able to gather my sense and opened my eyes I was in the hospital. Doctors told me that I have a hairline fracture in my food so I need to take proper treatment for it and probably two weeks bed rest.
I am sorry for not being able to contact you early due to my medical circumstances. However, to remove your melancholy and lifting your mood, I have a plan to watch a movie marathon at my home this weekend. I will make all the arrangements with the help of my family and you can invite a few more friends.
On the other hand, I have contacted the theater agency they can cancel our reservations and take the tickets back, also money will be refunded after cutting minimal service charges or otherwise, you can find another partner to accompany you. Hope to hear from you soon, also kindly forgive me this time.
Best Regards,
Sonia
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43497757848 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43459353313 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9688821794 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276465372162 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978700729424 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614403507207 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172914112003 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719528284673 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.