Dear Amart,
I hope this letter of mine finds you and your family in ravishing health. The purpose of my writing is regarding your interest and curiosity in products that could be exported from India for the expansion of your import and export business.
In my opinion, the specific products could be clothing range and ornaments from India, which could provide a large profit in the Russian market. As you know India is a multicultural country, garments from every part of it are diverse in wearing and vivid in many forms. I know a few villages in Rajasthan, Chennai and North-Eastern states of India, where some self-dependent women make these things on cheap rates with quality.
Indian culture is very popular and interesting in Russia, people there always lured by the hand-made range of ethnic wear with style and beautiful jewelry, also manufacturing with purity and strength is the virtue of these items. In addition, associating these local workers can be an international benefit for both. I am also in favor of introducing an application for smartphones for the advertising these items, I also have a prototype of that.
I hope you think about my recommendation and reply soon, I will always be ready to help. Provide my best to your family.
Best Regards,
Mani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in many forms. I know a few villages in Rajasthan, Chennai and North-Eastern sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, in addition, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00465116279 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80112007266 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632558139535 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1249722296 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8181818182 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164862316259 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555142591482 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662842145002 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100020000687 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786433993356 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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