Dear Sarah,
I'm so sorry I haven't gotten in touch with you for some time now since you borrowed me your camera.
To be honest with you, the camera got damaged while using it for my 21st birthday. It wasn't intentional and I'm really sorry about the incident.
I actually gave the Canon camera to my brother to use it to cover the occasion as I wouldn't be able to handle it personally being the celebrant. While using it, he bumped into one of the servers and unfortunately, the camera fell from his hands and the lens got broken.
But never mind, I have sent the camera for repairs and I'm so happy the repairer was able to get the exact lens for replacement. He promised it will look as much as the previous lens. I will sent it across to you immediately I get it back
So sorry once again about the damage and I hope to read from you soon.
Warm regards,
Wunmi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sarah, Im so sorry I havent gotten in touch with ...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
Dear Sarah, Im so sorry I havent gotten in touch with you for some time ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...while using it for my 21st birthday. It wasnt intentional and Im really sorry about t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...21st birthday. It wasnt intentional and Im really sorry about the incident. I a...
^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...er to use it to cover the occasion as I wouldnt be able to handle it personally being t...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... I have sent the camera for repairs and Im so happy the repairer was able to get t...
^^
Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'send'
Suggestion: send
...ok as much as the previous lens. I will sent it across to you immediately I get it b...
^^^^
Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... across to you immediately I get it back So sorry once again about the damage and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35151515152 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28903242037 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4474177283 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7777777778 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214795264955 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772961189218 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726359469449 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127680163411 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609155885841 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.