Dear Sir
I currently work as a Senior Software Engineer for Google Inc and I recently enrolled in the part-time evening MBA course at th Carlson School of Management. I am writing to request a change in my enrollment to the distance MBA program due to my conflicting work schedule.
I was recently assigned a project to a client in Australia. I. Expected to work during the time that is convenient for the client ; and as a result ,my work timing has shifted to 2p.-1am. In addition, the project is expected to last for eight months. Hence, I cannot pursue the evening course anymore.
I am sure that I am capable of finishing the assignments and examinations at my own pace. As at as I am concerned,both the programs cost the same. Hence, I believe that it would not cause any issues. If this is not possible, I prefer to drop the course and claim for a refund of tuition fees.
I look forward to response.
Yours faithfully,
Janet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...due to my conflicting work schedule. I was recently assigned a project to a cl...
^
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...venient for the client ; and as a result ,my work timing has shifted to 2p.-1am. I...
^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
... at my own pace. As at as I am concerned,both the programs cost the same. Hence, I be...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63313609467 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82248142316 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6762283841 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107772327512 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339812662557 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539379930402 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551313265444 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488760822152 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.