You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Dear John,
I would like to tend an apology for damaging your cricket bat handle which I borrowed last Sunday from you. I know that bat is near to your heart since your grandfather gave that to you.
I am extremely sorry for the handle disintegration.
Yesterday morning we were playing in the ground practice area near to the sidewall and there is a light drizzling there I batted without gloves and I missed to hold it firmly due to wet fingers and the bat missed and smashed on the wall and the handle broken.
I collected the handle along with the bat and gave it to the stadium carpenter who is familiar to fix that well before if you remember last year we fixed similarly. it will be available to you by next Saturday. I am extremely sad to say this to you however it is my responsibility to fix that one as new bat to play .
Thanks for your understanding.
Yours friendly
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear John, I would like to tend an apology for dama...
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...ce your grandfather gave that to you. I am extremely sorry for the handle disin...
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... sorry for the handle disintegration. Yesterday morning we were playing in the...
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...ed on the wall and the handle broken. I collected the handle along with the ba...
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Suggestion: It
... remember last year we fixed similarly. it will be available to you by next Saturd...
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Suggestion: .
...ility to fix that one as new bat to play . Thanks for your understanding. You...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or your understanding. Yours friendly Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44242424242 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59299389915 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5718035236 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4444444444 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236653479337 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120306455667 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861172226011 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115321977767 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100920486018 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.