You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say- Apologize for damaging the product- How was it damaged?- What will you do about it?
Dear Saad,
Hope you are doing well. I have to regretfully inform you that the travelling bag which I had borrowed from you has been damaged. Let me explain in detail.
Firstly, I know this travel bag was special for you as it was covered with travel stickers which reminded you of the overseas travel you did with your friends. Hence I would like to apologize and hope you are not angry with me as it was not intentional and happened by accident. To elucidate while travelling from Bangkok to Singapore the airline's staff had mishandled the travelling bag thus breaking the hard shell case from the top. Although the airline staff did send a written apology however the damage had already been done.
Lastly, I am ready to get the travel bag fixed from Samsonite store since your bag as it is still covered under warranty. Once fixed I shall return it to back to you.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Saad, Hope you are doing well. I have to regre...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rseas travel you did with your friends. Hence I would like to apologize and hope you ...
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Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... as it is still covered under warranty. Once fixed I shall return it to back to you....
^^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to meeting you soon. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, look, so, still, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65060240964 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32742271658 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3848002792 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1818181818 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264569286173 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915757421312 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696842465801 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152022095069 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666163917614 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.